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Kora wa Maid-Sama! by deer-princess Kora wa Maid-Sama! by deer-princess
Best title ever, no? :iconimhappyplz:

Lol, JK! But seriously! I hope someone gets the reference!

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So this is Kora, my OC~ Holy shiet, she looks to grown-up :I
I used someone else's drawing as a pose and anatomy reference, as it might improve my skills! >//u//<

Art, Kora=:iconxxmewkyaraxx:
Original art=:iconkawaiishi: ([link])~
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Critique by BombPrincess Nov 19, 2012, 7:44:22 AM
Very nice concept! You were able to make her personality shine through not only her speech, but her expression and her pose :D
I understand that you did this traditionally, so going back in and erasing the lineart (done in pen) isn't really possible. The lineart around her legs and arms looks rather sketchy. If you want to achieve neater, straighter lines, try drawing with your arm, by keeping your hand steady and just moving your arm.
The rest is anatomical: Her arms are as thick as her legs, which makes her look very disproportionate. Her thighs probably need to be made a little thicker next time, while her arms need to be made a little thinner.
Her torso is just a little long, but that is easily fixed by just starting her waist higher.
The last critique I will provide for this piece is the hair. The concept is there, but the execution doesn't quite hit the mark. Instead of just coloring the hair, certain pieces should be defined more. That way, the orange bangs will flow more into the blue, rather than the harsh contrast that there is, now.
I think this is really good work! Just some minor tweaking, and you will be on your way :la: Can't wait to see more from you!
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aiyume92 Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Soooo cool!!! This is awsome!! o(≧∀≦)o
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:icondeer-princess:
Hehe, thankies~ (Ohmaigawsh, I'm ten days late xDD)
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ShadiaTheDragoness Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Smexy!
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:icondeer-princess:
xDDD
Yeap, that's what Kora's known for~
Actually, it's more Kiki's thing :I
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Kawaiishi Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Damon: ...Heh. Yea bby <3
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:icondeer-princess:
Kora: D-Damon! W-what are you doing here?! *blushes and tries to nonchalantly pull her uniform skirt down*
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Kawaiishi Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Damon: *pulls in to a tight embrace, then kisses her neck* Whmw~ You look so delicious Kora~ *grins with his fangs*
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:icondeer-princess:
Kora: D-damon, I'm at w-work! I-I d-don't want anyone to s-see your fangs! *blushes and looks away, still tugging on her dress's hem.*
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Kawaiishi Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Damon: Don't worry so much~ *releases her hand from the hem, and pulls the skirt up* Hmhm~!
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:icondeer-princess:
Kora: W-what-! *blushes EVEN MORE and quickly pulls the skirt back down, then starts slowly rubbing her legs together in embarrassment* I-I'll ask f-for a break, s-so please wait for a moment!
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